CWP ~1

What I was thinking as I wrote it...

I had a vague idea of what I wanted and nothing else so just began to write.  I needed to keep it kind of bland so someone could put their stamp onto it easily but with enough details to make it interesting...

So I will just go paragraph by paragraph and let you know what was going through my mind as I was typing...


P1)

Usually I go to this one idea I am using for a novel that involves the people who are assigned to do things like "put song into head", I have about 4 good ones and a couple dozen bad ones that need work.   I don't know the world it will be set in, this horror flick...  so don't want to create one that is too detailed.  

It occurred me to that it might seem too cliche to one group to call her a "demon" and just as cliche to call her a "fairy" so decided to say she didn't care what she was called and leave it at that  :p

Competition is what drives them in my novel so when one gets something new and novel, even if it is horrible and causes too much work, everyone else wants one too :p  that is where the button thing came from...

P2)

Wanting to create a sort of synchronicity thing where what you do or think matters...  So tried to make it mirror, the lady in the doll factory and the lady in the soul factory.  The idea that it can sometimes be that simple, two people thinking or feeling the same thing at the same time...

Thinking it would be kind of scary to think it could happen just like that, for no real reason really.  "And "evil" enters our world"...

P3)

Setting up the idea that it is just  newborn to explain why it did not "come alive" until I created this idea... hehe..

P4)

This was meant to be a bit creepy, that without even knowing it, you too could be already booked for a 1-way ticket to the Dark Place...

P5)

Thinking a big city is easy to hide fledgling killers...  and why the doll leans toward the evil...

P6)

How it is beginning to realize it is "different" and that it wants to know why it can think a bit...  i didn't want to give a detailed explanation in case it gets changed... easier to do if leave it blank in first place...  so chose a cockroach to explain why I don't delve further...  

P7)

this was just to keep interest mostly...  like so much to tell, if you are good and patient...

P8)

Getting the doll to my hometown and into the shop, needed some story but mainly filler...

P9)

I think evil is learned, not born...  for the most part...  things that we label evil are usually things we just to not understand and fear are better or smarter then we are...  The boys go to jail and he is once again in a box within a box in a dark place...

P10)

I decided to make the shop owner a witch to explain his knowledge of black magic now...  :p  I will need to switch it out since the shop owner died in real life and I don't want to get sued or anything  :p  

P11)

this was just to show she wanted to be in the doll maybe and that the doll learned it could get a soul when someone dies... 


P12)

alternative and witches seem to go together, I mean people would want to upgrade witch stuff too I guess... 

P13)

getting the idea from my sister who wanted a cool doll horror flick  :p

P14)

and here we are...  setting the stage for the Soulless Doll...









I will go over how I plan to edit it in another one...  I think I already mentioned I think I am cutting the first half and starting with the doll on the shelf, forgotten and watching the 2 brothers out the window as they learn to kill birds with bb guns and then a homeless guy wanders past and...  but we will see...

hugs,

~Sea

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